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<mono pageend="true">
<p></p>
<p>In that chaos, the weak consciousness followed its ancient instincts.[\s]</p>
<p>Blindly but firmly it awakened and started growing.</p>
<p>Blindly but firmly, it awakened and started growing.</p>
</mono>
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<p></p>
<p></p>
<p></p>
<p>It has not discovered its own death yet.[\s]</p>
<p>It has not realized its own death yet.[\s]</p>
<p>The girl refuses to acknowledge her own death.</p>
</mono>
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<mono>Her hands were crippled.</mono>
<mono>Her hands are crippled.</mono>
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<mono>All her internal organs were destroyed.</mono>
<mono>All her internal organs are destroyed.</mono>
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<p></p>
<p>Her chest had taken more than a dozen blows.</p>
<p>Her chest has taken more than a dozen blows.</p>
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<p></p>
<p>However, the deadliest wound was on her head.</p>
<p>However, the deadliest wound is on her head.</p>
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</mono>
<mono inline="true"> destroyed her brain,</mono>
<mono> and passed through to the back of her head.</mono>
<mono>If it were for any other person, it would have died with just one of those injuries.</mono>
<mono>If it were for any other person, they would have died with just one of those injuries.</mono>
<mono pageend="true">
<p></p>
<p>But the「Celestial」wasn't ordinary.</p>
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<mono pageend="true">The Celestial is an immortal that never died.</mono>
<mono pageend="true">The Celestial is an immortal being that never died.</mono>
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<mono>
<p>Her body wouldn't die even after thousands of years,[\s]</p>
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<p></p>
<p>repairing the damaged organs...</p>
<p>repairing the damaged organs……</p>
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<p>Then, she felt pain,[\s] numbness,[\s] swelling,[\s] itching...[\s] every part of her body was screaming.[\s]</p>
<p>An endless torment took her over...</p>
<p>Then, she felt pain,[\s] numbness,[\s] swelling,[\s] itching……[\s] every part of her body was screaming.[\s]</p>
<p>An endless torment took her over……</p>
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<p></p>
<p>...an endless recovery,[\s] an endless pain.</p>
<p>……an endless recovery,[\s] an endless pain.</p>
</mono>
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<p></p>
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<p></p>
<p></p>
<p></p>
<p>... wh- ? 」</p>
<p>…… wh- ? 」</p>
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<mono>
<p></p>
<p>Seven...</p>
<p>Seven……</p>
</mono>
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<p></p>
<p></p>
<p></p>
<p>... Why ? 」</p>
<p>…… Why ? 」</p>
</mono>
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<p></p>
<p></p>
<p>...why? 」</p>
<p>……why? 」</p>
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<p></p>
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<p></p>
<p></p>
<p></p>
<p>...the Celestial decided to wait.</p>
<p>……the Celestial decided to wait.</p>
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<p></p>
<p>And then...</p>
<p>And then……</p>
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<mono>
<p>Pain[\s]</p>
<p></p>
<p>pain[\s]</p>
<p> Pain[\s]</p>
<p></p>
<p>pain[\s]</p>
<p> Pain[\s]</p>
<p></p>
<p>pain[\s]</p>
<p> Pain[\s]</p>
<p></p>
<p>Endless recovery and endless pain.</p>
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<p></p>
<p>This is a tiny "stop" in the desert.</p>
<p>This is a tiny stop in the desert.</p>
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<p></p>
<p>1400 years ago, wandering Tuik people discovered an oasis here.</p>
<p>1400 years ago, wandering Turkish people discovered an oasis here.</p>
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<p></p>
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<p></p>
<p>Years passed by unhurried and there was change.[\s]</p>
<p>Years passed by like flowing water, and the world changed rapidly.[\s]</p>
<p></p>
<p>Civilizations rose and fell; humans came and went, but they all sunk into the endless sands of the long river of history.</p>
</mono>
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<text>Looking around in the steaming heat, layers of sand dunes looked like waves rippling endlessly.</text>
<text>Looking around in the steaming heat, layers of sand dunes look like waves rippling endlessly.</text>
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<se id="01-14男气声哎"></se>
<dialog chara="095">*sigh*</dialog>
<text>
<p>The inhabitant of the oasis now sighed beneath the shadows of the ancient wall.[\s]</p>
<p>This dull and sunbathed desert, he had seen the scene for three months now.</p>
<p>The inhabitant of the oasis sighed beneath the shadows of the ancient wall.[\s]</p>
<p>He had seen the scene of this dull and sunbathed desert for three months now.</p>
</text>
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<dialog chara="095">*sigh*</dialog>
<text>
<p>The man sighed again.</p>
<p>The man sighs again.</p>
<p>The deserts heat and desolation agitates him.</p>
</text>
<text>
<p>Looking around, everything in his vision remained the same;</p>
<p>Looking around, everything in his vision remains the same;</p>
<p>the sun, the sky, the yellow sand…… are all immobile and motionless.</p>
<p>Even the air is stiff, theres not a breeze around him.</p>
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<text>In the distance, his companion responded by simply shaking his head, signaling nothing out of the ordinary was spotted.</text>
<text>
<p>The other man knew very well the man was just starting a conversation to alleviate his boredom.</p>
<p>But within this baking desert, talking was a luxury.</p>
<p>But in this desert like an oven, talking was a luxury.</p>
</text>
<text>
<p>Opening his mouth would be a waste of saliva.</p>
<p>The guard of the 「Golden Sand Gang」 didnt want to expend the effort.</p>
<p>It wouldn't be worth the effort for the 「Golden Sand Gang」.</p>
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<text>
<p>……He knows very well that the Boss didnt take him lightly just because hes new.</p>
<p>……He knew very well that the Boss didnt take him lightly just because hes new.</p>
<p>Normally gang members take turns looking after their base, it just so happens today is his turn.</p>
</text>
<text>Even though the Golden Sand Gang will still reward him all the same despite him staying back to protect the base.</text>
<text>
<p>But- he is a fighter, a real killer.</p>
<p>Robbing, looting, kidnapping, murdering… These are what he signed up to do.</p>
<p>The clashes of blades and the slicing of flesh… Those are the real rewards he seeks.</p>
<p>Robbing, looting, kidnapping, murdering… These are what he signed up to do.</p>
<p>The clashes of blades and the slicing of flesh… Those are the real rewards he seeks.</p>
</text>
<text>
<p>[em bold color=#ff0000]Battle[/em] and [em bold color=#ff0000]Killing[/em]; these are the things that the man values.[\s]</p>
<p>[em bold color=#ff0000]Battling[/em] and [em bold color=#ff0000]Killing[/em]; these are the things that the man values.[\s]</p>
<p>No doubt about it, this man is the evil amongst the evil.[\s]</p>
<p>Not only does he bear no shame in this, he prides himself with this as proof of who he really is.</p>
</text>
<text>
<p>As such, being left out of such a 「Big Fish」 makes the man feel extremely</p>
<p>humiliated and angry[\s]</p>
<p>humiliated and angry.[\s]</p>
<p>Its this anger that frustrates him and makes him talkative.</p>
</text>
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<text>In front of him, a girl was walking towards them.</text>
<text>
<p>The man wasnt hallucinating, this isnt one of those "mirages" that appear in the desert.[\s]</p>
<p>The girl… shes walking slowly towards them from the other end of the desert.</p>
<p>The girl… she was walking slowly towards them from the other end of the desert.</p>
</text>
<dialog chara="095">「R-Rong——!」</dialog>
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