* FIRST COMMIT - SCENE 4-00 first commit, it's a test but also a real review of the test. "hey haelle, you already reviewed this part though?" "yeah but it was really bad, I was doing single dialog review instead of reviewing the scene as a whole" The major changes here a uniformisation of the tenses: everything now respects the past tense as recommended in stories. You can learn more here: https://centralschool.ie/english-grammar/narrative-tenses/ Another major change are the "……" becoming "…", since the first form doesn't exist in english * scene 4-01 first draft * Update scene-4-01.xml * Update scene-4-01.xml * Update public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml * Update public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml * Update public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml * Update scene-4-02.xml * Update scene-4-00.xml * Apply extra fixes --------- Co-authored-by: Sakura Knoll <s4kura.knoll@gmail.com>
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