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HaeldralandSakura Knoll b09603ca41 New branch for test (scene 01 and 02) (#250)
* FIRST COMMIT - SCENE 4-00

first commit, it's a test but also a real review of the test.
"hey haelle, you already reviewed this part though?"
"yeah but it was really bad, I was doing single dialog review instead of reviewing the scene as a whole"

The major changes here a uniformisation of the tenses: everything now respects the past tense as recommended in stories. You can learn more here: https://centralschool.ie/english-grammar/narrative-tenses/
Another major change are the "……" becoming "…", since the first form doesn't exist in english

* scene 4-01 first draft

* Update scene-4-01.xml

* Update scene-4-01.xml

* Update public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml

* Update public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml

* Update public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml

* Update scene-4-02.xml

* Update scene-4-00.xml

* Apply extra fixes

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Co-authored-by: Sakura Knoll <s4kura.knoll@gmail.com>
b09603ca41 · 2023-04-11 08:34:55 +09:00
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