From b12080127fe20b19f7c66ce0af1fd0807f865396 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Sem104 <110847059+Sem104@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 18 Sep 2022 07:14:07 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Update scene-4-00.xml (#230) * Update scene-4-00.xml * Fix syntax error * Update scene-4-00.xml * Update scene-4-00.xml There's a backspace still missing between the last "pain" and "endless recovery, endless pain" Tried to fix in last branch too but didn't work, this time should (I hope) cuz there was a [\s] that shouldn't have been there cuz the two things were already separated by mono-mono Didn't affect the VN but maybe was the cause the backspace isn't showing... If you know how, feel free to modify, I'm hoping this is the last time I see this scene * Backspace error (yet again) The backspace still doesn't appear, let's see if this is the right way or else I'm out of ideas and we'll just leave it at that... T_T * Update scene-4-00.xml Think I got how to trigger that backspace (the 2 sentences were separated by mono-mono but the second one wasn't a "pageend" one so it should be fine to just unify the paragraphs only leaving aside the last one with the end of the page Also centered the other line you see modified because it was too high before and there was too much space below. Hope it's finally done now * Finally we're done YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS, THE LAST CHANGE WORKED We were only missing the spacebar/mouse click input "[ \ s ]" cuz I didn't think about it yesterday but hell fucken yeah chapter 0 is finally done Co-authored-by: Sakura Knoll --- public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml | 87 ++++++++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 55 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-) diff --git a/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml b/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml index db4561a3..0a42366b 100644 --- a/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml +++ b/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml @@ -9,17 +9,22 @@ - In the beginning, the new consciousness was like the birth of the world: just a spot of light in the universe. + +

+

In the beginning, the new consciousness was like the birth of the world:[\s]

+

just a spot of light in the universe.

+

-

『Its』power is still limited. It can neither receive signals from the senses, nor send them to the nerves.

+

『Its』power is still limited. [\s] It can neither receive signals from the senses, nor send them to the nerves.

-

In that chaos, the weak consciousness followed its ancient instincts. Blindly but firmly it awakened and started growing.

+

In that chaos, the weak consciousness followed its ancient instincts.[\s]

+

Blindly but firmly it awakened and started growing.

 @@ -100,7 +105,7 @@

Her body wouldn't die even after thousands of years,[\s]

neither would her soul, even after tens of thousands of years.[\s]

-

She completely overthrew the laws of nature,

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She completely overthrew the laws of nature,[\s]

she was the one and only Celestial of Shenzhou.

 @@ -117,7 +122,7 @@

-

starting from each braincell,

+

starting from each braincell,[\s]

the Celestial's mind and body began a long period of repair and reconstruction.

 @@ -178,16 +183,20 @@ She saw the line of light and shadow going from east to west and from west to east through the little window of the chamber. - She could smell the odor of the withering plants mixing with rotting insects. + +

+

She could smell the odor of the withering plants mixing with rotting insects.

+ - She heard the sound of falling leaves, welcoming the autumn, and the snow-covered branches swaying. + +

+

She heard the sound of falling leaves, welcoming the autumn, and the snow-covered branches swaying.

+ -

-

Then, she felt pain, numbness, swelling, itching...

-

Every part of her body was screaming.

+

Then, she felt pain,[\s] numbness,[\s] swelling,[\s] itching...[\s] every part of her body was screaming.[\s]

An endless torment took her over...

 @@ -195,7 +204,7 @@

-

...an endless recovery, an endless pain.

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...an endless recovery,[\s] an endless pain.

@@ -212,7 +221,8 @@

-

Her mind is still confused, she remembers some things but forgets more and more.

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Her mind is still confused. [\s]

+

She remembers some things but forgets more and more.

@@ -241,7 +251,8 @@

-

Suddely, thinking of that made long abandoned emotions swell up in her chest.

+

Suddenly[\s]

+

thinking of that made long abandoned emotions swell up in her chest.

 @@ -256,11 +267,15 @@

The Seven people closest to her.

 - The Seven Swords that stayed by her side for the longest time. + +

+

The Seven Swords that stayed by her side for the longest time.

+

Seven people that conspired, lured her to doom.[\s]

+

Seven Swords that trapped her and killed her.

 @@ -279,10 +294,14 @@

Many emotions swelled up endlessly:[\s]

+

+

anger,[\s]

doubt,[\s]

resentment,[\s]

fury,[\s]

+

+

and sadness, at the end.

 @@ -311,7 +330,8 @@

-

She has protected this land for countless years. Time doesn't matter for her anymore.

+

She has protected this land for countless years.[\s]

+

Time doesn't matter for her anymore.

@@ -319,19 +339,19 @@

She will keep waiting until her body and mind are fully healed,[\s]

-

then she will find those Seven and ask them why they killed her.

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then she will find those Seven[\s]

+

+

and ask them why they killed her.

 +

A strong desire was branded deep into her consciousness,[\s]

+

urging her,[\s]

+

pushing her,[\s]

+

changing her.[\s]

-

-

A strong desire was branded deep into her consciousness,

-

-

urging her,

-

pushing her,

-

changing her.

-

-

The wait becomes a habit and the pain becomes natural.

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The wait becomes a habit[\s]

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and the pain becomes natural.

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Pain

-

pain

-

pain

-

pain

- - +

Pain[\s]

+

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pain[\s]

+

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pain[\s]

+

+

pain[\s]

Endless recovery and endless pain.

 -

The Celestial remains silent.

 @@ -361,8 +381,11 @@

She has endured for a long time,

+

+ + +

she can still endure it.

 - she can still endure it.