diff --git a/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml b/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml index db4561a3..0a42366b 100644 --- a/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml +++ b/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml @@ -9,17 +9,22 @@ - In the beginning, the new consciousness was like the birth of the world: just a spot of light in the universe. + +

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In the beginning, the new consciousness was like the birth of the world:[\s]

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just a spot of light in the universe.

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『Its』power is still limited. It can neither receive signals from the senses, nor send them to the nerves.

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『Its』power is still limited. [\s] It can neither receive signals from the senses, nor send them to the nerves.

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In that chaos, the weak consciousness followed its ancient instincts. Blindly but firmly it awakened and started growing.

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In that chaos, the weak consciousness followed its ancient instincts.[\s]

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Blindly but firmly it awakened and started growing.

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Her body wouldn't die even after thousands of years,[\s]

neither would her soul, even after tens of thousands of years.[\s]

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She completely overthrew the laws of nature,

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She completely overthrew the laws of nature,[\s]

she was the one and only Celestial of Shenzhou.

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starting from each braincell,

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starting from each braincell,[\s]

the Celestial's mind and body began a long period of repair and reconstruction.

@@ -178,16 +183,20 @@ She saw the line of light and shadow going from east to west and from west to east through the little window of the chamber. - She could smell the odor of the withering plants mixing with rotting insects. + +

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She could smell the odor of the withering plants mixing with rotting insects.

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- She heard the sound of falling leaves, welcoming the autumn, and the snow-covered branches swaying. + +

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She heard the sound of falling leaves, welcoming the autumn, and the snow-covered branches swaying.

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Then, she felt pain, numbness, swelling, itching...

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Every part of her body was screaming.

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Then, she felt pain,[\s] numbness,[\s] swelling,[\s] itching...[\s] every part of her body was screaming.[\s]

An endless torment took her over...

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...an endless recovery, an endless pain.

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...an endless recovery,[\s] an endless pain.

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Her mind is still confused, she remembers some things but forgets more and more.

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Her mind is still confused. [\s]

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She remembers some things but forgets more and more.

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Suddely, thinking of that made long abandoned emotions swell up in her chest.

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Suddenly[\s]

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thinking of that made long abandoned emotions swell up in her chest.

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The Seven people closest to her.

- The Seven Swords that stayed by her side for the longest time. + +

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The Seven Swords that stayed by her side for the longest time.

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Seven people that conspired, lured her to doom.[\s]

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Seven Swords that trapped her and killed her.

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Many emotions swelled up endlessly:[\s]

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anger,[\s]

doubt,[\s]

resentment,[\s]

fury,[\s]

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and sadness, at the end.

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She has protected this land for countless years. Time doesn't matter for her anymore.

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She has protected this land for countless years.[\s]

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Time doesn't matter for her anymore.

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She will keep waiting until her body and mind are fully healed,[\s]

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then she will find those Seven and ask them why they killed her.

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then she will find those Seven[\s]

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and ask them why they killed her.

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A strong desire was branded deep into her consciousness,[\s]

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urging her,[\s]

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pushing her,[\s]

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changing her.[\s]

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A strong desire was branded deep into her consciousness,

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urging her,

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pushing her,

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changing her.

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The wait becomes a habit and the pain becomes natural.

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The wait becomes a habit[\s]

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and the pain becomes natural.

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Pain

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pain

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pain

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pain

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Pain[\s]

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pain[\s]

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pain[\s]

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pain[\s]

Endless recovery and endless pain.

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The Celestial remains silent.

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She has endured for a long time,

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+
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she can still endure it.

- she can still endure it.