From 2cbfb8bf5fa07396b59443b8ad114968cc4eeb9f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Sem104 <110847059+Sem104@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 14 Aug 2022 17:17:45 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Update scene-4-00.xml (#229) --- public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml | 129 +++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 66 insertions(+), 63 deletions(-) diff --git a/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml b/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml index 06de23a9..db4561a3 100644 --- a/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml +++ b/public/novels/7s/en-US/xml/scene-4-00.xml @@ -4,22 +4,22 @@

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In the endless darkness, [\s]the dead Celestial's consciousness awakened

+

In the endless darkness, [\s]the dead Celestial's consciousness awakened.

- In the beginning, the new consciousness was like the birth of the world, just a spot of light in the universe + In the beginning, the new consciousness was like the birth of the world: just a spot of light in the universe.

-

『Its』power is still limitedIt can neither receive signals from the senses, nor send them to the nerves

+

『Its』power is still limited. It can neither receive signals from the senses, nor send them to the nerves.

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In that chaos, the weak consciousness followed its ancient instincts. Blindly but firmly it awakens and starts growing

+

In that chaos, the weak consciousness followed its ancient instincts. Blindly but firmly it awakened and started growing.

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It has not discovered its own death yet[\s]

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The girl refuses to acknowledge her own death——

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It has not discovered its own death yet.[\s]

+

The girl refuses to acknowledge her own death.

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Judging by common sense, the immortal Celestial is indeed dead

+

Judging by common sense, the immortal Celestial is indeed dead.

- Her right leg has been cut off, and it's missing from the ankle below + Her right leg has been cut off, and it's missing from the ankle below. - Her hands were crippled + Her hands were crippled. - All her internal organs were destroyed + All her internal organs were destroyed.

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Her chest had taken more than a dozen blows

+

Her chest had taken more than a dozen blows.

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However, the deadliest wound was on her head

+

However, the deadliest wound was on her head.

 - It was wounded by a sword + It was wounded by a sword.

The sword struck her forehead,

 destroyed her brain, - and passed through to the back of her head - If it were for any other person, it would have died with just one of those injuries + and passed through to the back of her head. + If it were for any other person, it would have died with just one of those injuries.

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But the「Celestial」wasn't ordinary

+

But the「Celestial」wasn't ordinary.

 @@ -94,20 +94,20 @@ - The Celestial is an immortal that never died + The Celestial is an immortal that never died.

Her body wouldn't die even after thousands of years,[\s]

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neither would her soul, even after tens of thousands of years[\s]

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neither would her soul, even after tens of thousands of years.[\s]

She completely overthrew the laws of nature,

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she was the one and only Celestial of Shenzhou

+

she was the one and only Celestial of Shenzhou.

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This was the very essence of the body that was now lying still in the stone chamber

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This was the very essence of the body that was now lying still in the stone chamber.

 And so, @@ -117,8 +117,8 @@

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Starting from each braincell,

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the Celestial's mind and body began a long period of repair and reconstruction

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starting from each braincell,

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the Celestial's mind and body began a long period of repair and reconstruction.

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Gradually, the Celestial's 『consciousness』started perceiving its surroundings

+

Gradually, the Celestial's 『consciousness』started perceiving its surroundings.

- She saw the line of light and shadow going from east to west and from west to east through the little window of the chamber + She saw the line of light and shadow going from east to west and from west to east through the little window of the chamber. - She could smell the odor of the withering plants mixing with rotting insects + She could smell the odor of the withering plants mixing with rotting insects. - She heard the sound of falling leaves, welcoming the autumn, and the snow-covered branches swaying + She heard the sound of falling leaves, welcoming the autumn, and the snow-covered branches swaying.

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Then she felt pain, numbness, swelling, itching... every part of her body was screaming

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An endless torment took her over

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Then, she felt pain, numbness, swelling, itching...

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Every part of her body was screaming.

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An endless torment took her over...

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...an endless recovery, an endless pain

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...an endless recovery, an endless pain.

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The Celestial remains silent

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The Celestial remains silent.

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「 Who am I ? 」

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「 Who am I ? 」

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Her mind is still confused, she remembers some things but forgets more and more

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Her mind is still confused, she remembers some things but forgets more and more.

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「 Where is this ? 」

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「 Where is this ? 」

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With just fragments in her memory, she can't put together the answer she seeks

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With just fragments in her memory, she can't put together the answer she seeks.

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「 … wh- ? 」

+

「 ... wh- ? 」

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Suddely, thinking of that made long abandoned emotions swell up in her chest

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Suddely, thinking of that made long abandoned emotions swell up in her chest.

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Seven…

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Seven...

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The Seven people closest to her

+

The Seven people closest to her.

 - The Seven Swords that stayed by her side for the longest time + The Seven Swords that stayed by her side for the longest time.

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Seven people that conspired, lured her to doom[\s]

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Seven Swords that trapped her and killed her

+

Seven people that conspired, lured her to doom.[\s]

+

Seven Swords that trapped her and killed her.

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「 … Why ? 」

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「 ... Why ? 」

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Many emotions swelled up endlessly[\s]

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Anger,[\s]

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Doubt,[\s]

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Resentment,[\s]

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Fury,[\s]

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and sadness, at the end

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Many emotions swelled up endlessly:[\s]

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anger,[\s]

+

doubt,[\s]

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resentment,[\s]

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fury,[\s]

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and sadness, at the end.

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「… why?」

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「 ...why? 」

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There's no answer, only the desire to find one

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There's no answer, only the desire to find one.

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… the Celestial decide to wait

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...the Celestial decided to wait.

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She has protected this land for countless years. time doesn't matter for her anymore

+

She has protected this land for countless years. Time doesn't matter for her anymore.

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She will keep waiting until her body and mind are fully healed[\s]

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She will keep waiting until her body and mind are fully healed,[\s]

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Then she will find those Seven and ask them why they killed her

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then she will find those Seven and ask them why they killed her.

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A strong desire was branded deep into her consciousness,

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urging her, pushing her, changing her

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urging her,

+

pushing her,

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changing her.

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The wait becomes a habit and the pain becomes natural

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The wait becomes a habit and the pain becomes natural.

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And then…

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And then...

Pain

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Pain

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Pain

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Pain

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pain

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pain

+

pain

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Endless recovery and endless pain

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Endless recovery and endless pain.

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The Celestial remains silent

+

The Celestial remains silent.

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She has endured for a long time,

- she can still endure it + she can still endure it.